Major film changes + Draft film (half)

Recently we started piecing together all our footage in order to get a sense of what our film would be like, this was divided into two parts (to share the work load) and after reviewing we realised our narrative is too vaguely presented to understand, and our footage was too "shaky" and needed re filming.
So overall we're working a complete film change including a new script, a new story board and new additional camera angles.

Here is the better half of our complete draft, the first part was too inefficient to include and needs desperate attention, although this is without music or filters it gives a good idea of what the end product will be like.